tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2621565099818659576.post6789560908610826838..comments2018-04-26T22:08:33.384+12:00Comments on Jacob @ Elm Park School: My superpowerClassof2019http://www.blogger.com/profile/02313464699381718303noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2621565099818659576.post-20677021802972105362016-06-26T19:59:33.467+12:002016-06-26T19:59:33.467+12:00Excellent work, Jacob! I really like how you'...Excellent work, Jacob! I really like how you've tried to use WOW words like "powerful" to make your writing interesting. Remember that "I" is always written in capitals and to add more full stops to your writing. Keep up your hard work!Miss Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01681746258578988375noreply@blogger.com