Friday, June 24, 2016

My superpower

My superpower

My super power is gravity and I can make people flot in the air. And I can stop robbers and I am also powerful and i can fly to the ather side of the world i could go everywhere and i could do what i want to do.

By Jacob

I am learning to add WOW words to add detail to my writing.  My next steps are to write my capital letters and full stops in the right places.

1 comment:

Miss Kim said...

Excellent work, Jacob! I really like how you've tried to use WOW words like "powerful" to make your writing interesting. Remember that "I" is always written in capitals and to add more full stops to your writing. Keep up your hard work!